Question

最近這幾天，在中國(guó)很多地區(qū)出現(xiàn)嚴(yán)重的霧霾天氣。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇短文。參考詞匯：霧霾haze；秸稈straw

問(wèn)題	天空布滿霧霾，能見(jiàn)度很低，連續(xù)多天看不到太陽(yáng)，糟糕天氣持續(xù)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)。
危害	影響交通，造成多種疾病。
原因	汽車增多，工廠污染，焚燒秸稈。
措施	1.建議大家盡量不要自己開(kāi)車，而是坐公交車或地鐵出門(mén)。 2.阻止工廠把廢棄物排入河中來(lái)減少水污染。 3.我們不應(yīng)該使用一次性（disposable）盤(pán)子，碗。 4.我們還應(yīng)該 ......

要求：1、短文要包括列舉的要點(diǎn)并且適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2、語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。
3、詞數(shù)80詞以上，文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
These days, there has been a thick haze in many areas of China.            
                                                                              
                                                                              

Answer 1

One possible version：
These days, there has been a thick haze in many areas of China.The distance we can see is very near. It separates us from the sun for many days.And the terrible weather has last a long time. It does harm to our everyday life.The traffic is affected and the polluted air may cause many kinds of diseases.So why there is a thick haze now? There are many reasons:The increasing number of the cars, the pollution from factories and many people burn straw to cook or make warm and so on.
Now the most important things for us to do is to make measures to protect us from the haze. First, We should try to take public traffic tools like metro and bus instead of driving a car.Second,factories should be stopped from pour waste water into the river. Third we shouldn't use disposable plates and bowls.Above all, everybody shoud take action to do something to save our environment.

試題分析：本篇寫(xiě)作話題為非常熱門(mén)的霧霾問(wèn)題，題中要求從問(wèn)題、危害、原因、措施四個(gè)方面來(lái)表達(dá)。寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容要把提示的內(nèi)容整合起來(lái)，同時(shí)也要表達(dá)一些自己的觀點(diǎn)。整合信息，需要用到一些過(guò)渡的短語(yǔ)活句子來(lái)使文章連貫，另外，要講究分層分段，做到層次分明。很重要的一點(diǎn)，全文要有重心，本文的重心在于呼吁人們保護(hù)環(huán)境。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】例文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，連貫性好。大體分成兩部分，第一部分主要介紹了霧霾的現(xiàn)象危害和原因，引起讀者的重視。第二部分為根據(jù)第一部分的分析，我們可以采取哪些措施。最后呼吁大家每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該行動(dòng)起來(lái)保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境。文章中用到許多的連貫詞來(lái)聯(lián)系全文，同時(shí)也用到了first second 等等的詞是文章層次文明，一目了然。