Question

書面表達(dá)。 （滿分15分）
2014年高考改革引發(fā)了熱議，許多人對中國學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)英語的重要性有了更多的思考。請你針對這一現(xiàn)象寫一篇文章談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn)以及如何才能更輕松地學(xué)好英語。（不寫標(biāo)題，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80字）
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         

Answer 1

In my opinion, learning English well is very important for us. Because English is widely used around the world. It’s used as the first or official language in many countries. And two thirds of the world’s scientists read and write in English. About 200 million users of the Internet communicate in English, too.
But how to study English better? I think we must have a good way to study English. If you want to learn English well, listening, speaking, reading and writing are important. You should listen to the tapes every day,speak English as often as possible or read English every morning .Keeping a diary is the same important.Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.
Where there is a will, there is a way. If you can work harder at English, you will succeed in learning it well.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)：英語學(xué)習(xí)的重要性；如何學(xué)好英語兩個(gè)方面。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文思路清晰，邏輯性強(qiáng)。使用了適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞及諺語，為文章增色不少.如: 歸納總結(jié)類In my opinion 我的觀點(diǎn)是， 因果關(guān)系Because，并聯(lián)關(guān)系A(chǔ)nd， But how to study English better?但怎樣學(xué)英語更好呢，引起下文，起到承上啟下的作用.Where there is a will, there is a way有志者，事竟成。引用諺語更有說服力。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.