Question

書(shū)面表達(dá) （共15分）
新學(xué)期開(kāi)始，你就讀的國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)生社團(tuán)又開(kāi)始招募了。假設(shè)你是社團(tuán)負(fù)責(zé)人，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容和要求寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，為新同學(xué)介紹下列社團(tuán)的情況(包括名稱(chēng)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及其目的)。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)70左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；
2. 不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息。否則不予評(píng)分。

Welcome to school clubs
The new term is coming. For all our new students, I would like to introduce some of our clubs.
These are the most popular clubs in our school, and hope you can join us.

Answer 1

Welcome to school clubs
The new term is coming. For all our new students, I would like to introduce some of our clubs.
Cool Players is a good choice for sports lovers. Here you can do sports one hour a day to make you healthy and strong, and you can watch sports matches. If you are interested in books, Smart Readers is a good choice. Reading good books and writing reading notes are useful to improve your knowledge and open up your eyes. Do you want to be a volunteer? If so, you can join Happy Volunteers and take part in shows or help needy people in the city.
These are the most popular clubs in our school, and hope you can join us.

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以所提供內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇作文，即介紹三個(gè)社團(tuán)的情況(包括名稱(chēng)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及其目的)。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，即：每個(gè)俱樂(lè)部的主要內(nèi)容。一是俱樂(lè)部名稱(chēng)；二是俱樂(lè)部活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；三是俱樂(lè)部的目的。樂(lè)善者俱樂(lè)部的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容與目的需要我們自己補(bǔ)充。主要內(nèi)容雖然已經(jīng)列出，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實(shí)，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費(fèi)我們的想象力，以及我們平時(shí)積累的知識(shí)。另外，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者從三個(gè)方面介紹了每一個(gè)俱樂(lè)部，介紹了俱樂(lè)部的名稱(chēng)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和目的，層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯(cuò)。如Do you want to be a volunteer? If so, you can join Happy Volunteers and take part in shows or help needy people in the city.等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如If you are interested in books, Smart Readers is a good choice.等。