Question

假設(shè)你叫李華，你們市將要舉行以“How to Eat in a Healthy Way”為題的演講比賽，請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備寫一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：
1.說明此次演講的主題(how to eat in a healthy way)。
2.我們應(yīng)該少吃、不吃及多吃的食物有哪些，并說明原因。
3.描述自己的健康飲食習(xí)慣，并舉例說明。
4.希望大家都有個(gè)好的飲食習(xí)慣。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。
2.語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。
How to Eat in a Healthy Way
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Answer 1

How to Eat in a Healthy Way
Hello, everybody.I'm Li Hua.Today my topic is how to eat in a healthy way.
Firstly, we should never eat fried food or foods with lots of sugar because they are not good for health.Secondly, try to eat more vegetables and fruit.Because they can make us become much healthier.
My eating habits are good.For example, I often eat healthy foods, like wholemeal bread, eggs, vegetables and milk for breakfast and rice, noodles, and vegetables for dinner.
I hope everyone can eat in a healthy way.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: be not good for；.Because they can make us become much healthier.等短語(yǔ)和句式。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。