Question

在一次英語(yǔ)班會(huì)上,老師請(qǐng)同學(xué)們以“Proud of My School”為主題發(fā)言。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所給的提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。詞數(shù)要求在80左右。
提示：①What does your school look like?
②What fun do you have at school?
③Why do you like your school?

Answer 1

My school is very big. There are several tall buildings in it. There are more than 2000 students in my school. We have a big playground with lots of trees around it. There are a lot of flowers everywhere.
We have a lot of fun at school every day. After class we play games and do lots of sports, such as  playing basketball, football ，tennis and so on. We work very hard and do very well in our lessons.
I love my school because it’s like a big family. The teachers in my school are very kind to us. I am proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文主要是以演講稿的形式寫自己為什么以學(xué)校為自豪， 全文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如 more than， lots of，a lot of ，at school，every day，have  fun，After class，such as，and so on，do very well， in my school ，are very kind to ， be proud of，等短語(yǔ)，用到原因狀語(yǔ)從句如because it’s like a big family，because it is one of the best schools in my heart；多次用到there be句型如There are several tall buildings in it.；with獨(dú)立主格做定語(yǔ)如with lots of trees around it。文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。