Question

在你的業(yè)余時(shí)間，你有什么特別的愛好？也許體育活動(dòng)(籃球，乒乓球，游泳等)是你的酷愛；也許你有藝術(shù)天賦，唱歌、跳舞、音樂、繪畫是你的專長(zhǎng)；也許收集是你生活中不可缺少的一部分；也許……
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上提示，將你的愛好和與之相關(guān)的趣事寫信給你的筆友。
要求：1. 選擇你的一個(gè)愛好來詳寫； 2. 語句通順，意思明確； 3. 60-80詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your last letter. You asked me to tell you something about my hobby.
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Yours,
Kangkang

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
Thank you for your last letter. You asked me to tell you something about my hobby.
I like playing basketball very much.I have played basketball when I was 10 years old.However I have never given up playing basketball from then on.I make full use of my free time to play basketball,do more exercises about runing ,jumping,passing the ball.And I am working for our shool's basketball team.I think basketball not only can harden my body ,but also can fillfull of my free time.I will keep on my hobby of basketball.I will never give up it.
Yours,
Kangkang

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者寫自己的個(gè)人愛好，如何提高自己打籃球的水平，以及這一愛好的好處，全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如given up,from then on,make full use of ,working for,not onl...but also,keep on等短語，文中還用到了時(shí)間狀語從句 when I was 10 years old.賓語從句 basketball not only can harden my body ,but also can fillfull of my free time.文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。