Question

凱特(Kate)有一個(gè)快樂(lè)的家庭，她和家人的信息在下列表格中。如果你是Kate，你將如何介紹自己和家人。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文。要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思表達(dá)清楚。

Family members	Age (年齡)	Likes	Favorite things
Kate	11	Nice food	Hamburgers
Father	36	Sports	Soccer
Mother	34	New clothes	Sweaters

                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 

Answer 1

I’m Kate. I’m 11 years old. I like nice food. And my favorite food is hamburgers. I have a happy family, my father,my mother and I.My father is 36 years old. He likes to play sports. But his favorite sports is soccer. My mother is 34 years old. She likes new clothes. And her favorite clothes is sweaters. I love my family.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，Kate介紹自己的家人。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I like.......,my favorite......及She likes ......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己對(duì)家人的愛(ài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來(lái)介紹我們的共同點(diǎn)與不同之處，最后指出我們的擅長(zhǎng)。此處用了 likes to，play sports，her favorite clothes等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。