Question

近來各種污染非常嚴重，已經(jīng)影響了人們的日常生活。假如你是張琳，請你給各界朋友些一封信，說說污染對人們生活造成的影響，并呼吁大家行動起來環(huán)境。（開頭和結(jié)尾一給出，不急入總詞數(shù)）

影響	1.有各種各樣的污染。 2水污染使我們沒有足夠多的飲用水 3空氣污染最嚴重，我們不得不在室內(nèi)做各種活動……。
希望	1.出行不開車，改乘公交或騎自行車。 2節(jié)約用水，隨手關(guān)閉水龍頭 3都栽樹種花，循環(huán)利用書紙……。

 要求：表格中每欄已經(jīng)給出一項內(nèi)容，其他內(nèi)容自擬。至少再寫出兩項。
Dear Friends,
My name is Zhang Lin. I’m a middle school student ___________________________
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Zhang Lin

Answer 1

Dear Friends,
My name is Zhang Lin. I’m a middle school student. At present, the pollution of our environment is becoming more and more serious. There are all kinds of pollution. The water is polluted so we don’t have enough water to drink. And the air pollution is the worst, which make us can’t do exercise outside. Instead, we have to take activities indoor. Also, the earth gets polluted, and some plants have something bad for our health.
Since the pollution has bad effects on our lives, we must take some methods to deal with it. We can ride or take a bus instead of driving a car. We also need to save water. Besides, we can plant more trees and flowers. They can make the environment more beautiful and cleaner.
I think our environment can be improved.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。題中已經(jīng)給出了寫作的要點和要求。在寫作時，要注意要點信息的齊全。文章的各類信息要有效組織起來，并且使用一些過渡性的句子和短語來加強文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。同時，句子表達要完整準確，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)等問題。
【亮點分析】這篇文章要點齊全，表達準確流利。文中使用了一些很有用的句型和表達方式，例如：And the air pollution is the worst, which make us can’t do exercise outside.空氣污染是最嚴重的，這使我們不能在戶外進行運動；which引導一個非限制性定語從句。Since the pollution has bad effects on our lives, we must take some methods to deal with it.既然污染對我們的生活帶來了不好的影響，我們必須采取措施來解決它。Since因為；deal with處理。