Question

請(qǐng)你以David的身份給May寫(xiě)一封信, 介紹你自己和你家人的情況。你可以談?wù)勊麄兊墓ぷ骱退麄兯�喜歡的食品。信的開(kāi)頭和末尾已經(jīng)給出。你需要用下面的提示詞: family, happy, teacher, doctor, fish, chicken, vegetables。要求60-70詞。
Dear May,
I’m David. I’m from England. __________________________________________________
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Yours,  
David 

Answer 1

Dear May,
I’m David. I’m from England. I want to tell you about my family. Four people (人) are in my family. They’re my mother, my father, my sister and I. My father is an English teacher. He likes fish very much. My mother is a doctor. She likes cooking. Chicken is her favorite food. My sister Julia and I are in the same school. We don’t like eating vegetables. But my parents tell us to eat more vegetables. They are good to us. Look, we have a happy family.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。主要介紹你自己和你家人的情況。也可以談?wù)勊麄兊墓ぷ骱退麄兯�喜歡的食品。主要是第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文要點(diǎn)全，介紹詳細(xì)，注意到了主謂一致。同時(shí)能用到But， are good to等給文章增色不少。