Question

現(xiàn)在很多學(xué)生周末都在上課，家長認(rèn)為很好,而學(xué)生們卻有很多抱怨。請(qǐng)你以Should students have lessons at the weekend?為題，參照表內(nèi)所提供的信息，寫一篇英語短文。

Parents	Students	Your opinion(觀點(diǎn))
1.learn more and better 2. no time to play computer games	1. have no time to relax 2. have no time to do their homework	1…. 2…. ….

注意：1．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表中各方觀點(diǎn)。(可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)。
2．詞數(shù)不少于70詞，短文的開頭已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
Should students have lessons at the weekend?
Nowadays many teenagers have lessons at the weekend.

Answer 1

one possible vision:
Should students have lessons at the weekend 
Nowadays many teenagers have lessons at the weekends. Many parents think we can learn more and better with the help of our teachers at school. And we may feel happy to be with our classmates at school. What’s more, we won’t have time to play computer games. So they think it’s a good idea to have lessons at the weekend. Some students think if they have lessons at the weekends, they will have no time to do their homework. Of course, they have no time to relax themselves at all. In my opinion, we students should have a rest after studying for a week. We need some time to do what we like, such as playing basketball, swimming, running and so on. Also, at the weekend, we can spend more time on the lessons that we are not very good at. 

試題分析：本作文題目是話題作文。以周末是否應(yīng)該上課為話題，展開討論。題中給出了內(nèi)容提示。大體分為三部分，父母的想法，學(xué)生的想法，和你的觀點(diǎn)。父母和學(xué)生的想法已經(jīng)給出，必須包含在作文中。自己的想法要獨(dú)自發(fā)揮。文章的重心應(yīng)該是your opinion。在完整表達(dá)所給內(nèi)容之后，重點(diǎn)要有層次連貫地表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】例文內(nèi)容完整不羅嗦，層次分明不混亂。用自己的話，把所給的內(nèi)容巧妙地連接起來，成為一體。并未呆板的按照作文提示一步一步進(jìn)行。巧妙的表達(dá)了父母和學(xué)生的想法之后，明確地闡明了作者的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。文章還用到了所學(xué)的重要短語句式。比如，it’s adj to do sth； of  course; in one’s opinion等等，提高了文章的層次。