Question

以My School day為題寫一篇短文，描述一下自己一天的學(xué)校生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況。要求：中心明確、語句通順，60詞左右。
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Answer 1

My School day
I am a primary school student. I am twelve years old. I usually get up at 6: 00 in the morning, after breakfast I go to school at 6: 50. I have seven lessons in a day. I learn Chinese, Maths, English and other subjects. In the afternoon, I do sports with my friends. In the evening I do my homework and watch TV with my parents. I go to bed at about 9 in the evening. My school life is wonderful. I love my school day.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，安排好文章的內(nèi)容。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。注意單詞的拼寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的運(yùn)用。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】1、短文的時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用很好，因?yàn)槭切�園生活的某一天，所以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)最合適；
2、短文內(nèi)容充實(shí)，介紹了從早到晚的作息時(shí)間，以及給時(shí)間段的活動(dòng)。
3、短文結(jié)尾用了總結(jié)性文字，提升了情感品味。