Question

資源短缺威脅全球，節(jié)約資源刻不容緩。勤儉光榮，浪費可恥。假設你是李雷，請你給全班同學寫一封倡議信，內(nèi)容包括：
談談你曾經(jīng)看到的校園內(nèi)出現(xiàn)的資源浪費的現(xiàn)象，你當時的感受是什么？
針對校園出現(xiàn)的各種浪費現(xiàn)象，向同學們提出至少三條改進措施
號召大家節(jié)約資源，杜絕浪費。
注意：在書信中不能透露真實的姓名和學校，不能照抄原文。詞數(shù)：80詞左右。
參考詞匯：resource(資源)  electricity(電) 
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Li Lei

Answer 1

Dear classmates,
Nowadays, some of our students have formed some bad habits on campus. They leave the lights on in the daytime or leave water running after washing. Some leave too much food on the table after eating in the canteen. Besides,waste paper and books can be seen everywhere. These bad habits will not only have bad influence on our character and behavior,but also waste the limited resources. If we keep on wasting things, there will not be anything left on the earth. So it is high time that we had to deal with the problems.Firstly, make sure that the lights and the electric fans are turned off when there is no one in the room.Secondly,don’t forget to turn off the tap after it is used. Thirdly, it will be good enough for us to use a basket instead of a plastic bag when go to the market. Fourthly, We can use both sides of every piece of paper, especially when we are making notes.
If we reduce the waste, we will change the present situation.
Yours,
Li Lei

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。作本文題材緊扣學生學習生活，學生有很大的發(fā)揮空間。動筆前要認真審題，深入挖掘話題內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。行文時要注意人稱、時態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，同時適當使用連接詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內(nèi)容，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復合句，使文章自然流暢。同時，使用了一些常用的句式和短語，如：not only---but also、it is high time that從句、make sure that 從句、it will be good enough for us to use、in the daytime、have influence on、deal with、turn off、instead of以及連接詞besides、firstly、secondly等，這為文章增色不少。在學習中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。