Question

請根據(jù)下面所給的題目和英文提綱，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文，談?wù)勀銓Τ鞘薪煌▎栴}的看法。

Almost every modern city faces traffic problems.
There is always heavy traffic on the main streets and traffic accidents often happen.
Main cause	The increasing population
How to deal with (處理）traffic problems	Take some measures (措施) to reduce the traffic problems
	Be more careful on the street.

Answer 1

 
Urban traffic problem
Almost every modern city faces traffic problems .There is always heavy traffic on the main streets and traffic accidents often happen. People waste a lot of time in waiting the bus or on their way home. It's time the government take measures to improve the traffic conditiongs. The main reason is the increasing population.
In my view,first,government should broad the road to make more cars pass through.second,people should be encouraged to go by bus or bike instead of driving cars,this will definitely reduce the air pollution as well.Third,people can go by subway in the rush hours.Fourth,people must be careful on the street.
In a word ,I believe that we can improve our traffic condictions if we try our best.

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹城市的交通問題，并列出交通的原因，以及解決措施，其中，列出改善交通的措施是本文的難點。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如waste a lot of time in waiting the bus, on their way home, instead of driving car, try our best . In my view，In a word等，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。