Question

上星期學(xué)校就周末補(bǔ)課問(wèn)題在家長(zhǎng)中作了一次調(diào)查。以下是家長(zhǎng)的觀點(diǎn)：多數(shù)家長(zhǎng)贊同周末補(bǔ)課，部分家長(zhǎng)卻表示反對(duì)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示作總結(jié)匯報(bào)，并表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)。
要求：（1）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，要求意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順。
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Most parents	A few parents
get more knowledge	too tired, too much pressure
have better grades	can’t have a good rest
not play computer games or watch TV	no time to do what they like to do

Last week, we did a survey of what parents think of extra classes on weekends. Here are the results.            
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                       
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            

Answer 1

One possible version：
Last week, we did a survey of what parents think of extra classes on weekends. Here are the results. Most parents think it’s good to have classes on weekends. If students have classes on weekends, they can get more knowledge and they can have better grades. And they can’t play computer games or watch TV. A few parents think it’s not good to have classes on weekends. Because now students are too tired and have too much pressure . They need time to have a good rest. And if they have classes on weekends, they will have no time to do what they like to do.
I think it’s not good to have classes on weekends. Because students are too tired on weekdays. They need to spend some time with friends. What’s more, if students have extra classes on weekends, they won’t have enough time to finish their homework.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以在寫作時(shí)，要尤其一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的表達(dá)方式。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，開頭結(jié)尾相呼應(yīng)。開頭指出家長(zhǎng)對(duì)周末補(bǔ)課持兩種觀點(diǎn)，認(rèn)為周末補(bǔ)課有利也有弊。第二段論述自己對(duì)周末補(bǔ)課的態(tài)度。此處用了條件狀語(yǔ)從句If students have classes on weekends, they can get more knowledge and they can have better grades. it’s good to ，have a good rest，What’s more,這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。最后在說(shuō)周末補(bǔ)課太多不利于家庭作業(yè)的完成與文章開頭相呼應(yīng)。