Question

上星期學校就周末補課問題在家長中作了一次調(diào)查。以下是家長的觀點：多數(shù)家長贊同周末補課，部分家長卻表示反對。請你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示作總結匯報，并表達你的觀點。
要求：（1）可以適當增加細節(jié)，要求意思連貫，語句通順。
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Most parents	A few parents
get more knowledge	too tired, too much pressure
have better grades	can’t have a good rest
not play computer games or watch TV	no time to do what they like to do

Last week, we did a survey of what parents think of extra classes on weekends. Here are the results.            
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                       
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            

Answer 1

One possible version：
Last week, we did a survey of what parents think of extra classes on weekends. Here are the results. Most parents think it’s good to have classes on weekends. If students have classes on weekends, they can get more knowledge and they can have better grades. And they can’t play computer games or watch TV. A few parents think it’s not good to have classes on weekends. Because now students are too tired and have too much pressure . They need time to have a good rest. And if they have classes on weekends, they will have no time to do what they like to do.
I think it’s not good to have classes on weekends. Because students are too tired on weekdays. They need to spend some time with friends. What’s more, if students have extra classes on weekends, they won’t have enough time to finish their homework.

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應用一般現(xiàn)在時，所以在寫作時，要尤其一般現(xiàn)在時的表達方式。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，開頭結尾相呼應。開頭指出家長對周末補課持兩種觀點，認為周末補課有利也有弊。第二段論述自己對周末補課的態(tài)度。此處用了條件狀語從句If students have classes on weekends, they can get more knowledge and they can have better grades. it’s good to ，have a good rest，What’s more,這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。最后在說周末補課太多不利于家庭作業(yè)的完成與文章開頭相呼應。