Question

書面表達(dá)（共15分）
目前，九年級(jí)的同學(xué)們學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)繁重，易產(chǎn)生焦慮等情緒。你的朋友Simon以往性格開(kāi)朗，最近因感覺(jué)壓力大而變得少言寡語(yǔ)，與同學(xué)溝通困難；他在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)上有困難，而且考前緊張失眠；因父母讓他放棄他喜愛(ài)的籃球活動(dòng)而與父母吵架。假設(shè)你叫Joe，請(qǐng)根據(jù)Simon的問(wèn)題，給他寫封E-mail，提出解決方案。
要求：1、針對(duì)問(wèn)題，用不同的方式提建議，其中包含虛擬語(yǔ)氣。
2、語(yǔ)言流暢，語(yǔ)法正確。
3、詞數(shù):80 – 100。（開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
Dear Simon,
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Best wishes,
Joe

Answer 1

Dear Simon,
I’m sorry to hear that you have had so much trouble since you got into Grade 3. I’m writing to give you some help.
You used to be outgoing and now you don’t want to express yourself because of the stress from study. So you don’t get along well with your classmates. I think you should communicate with your classmates often. As for your English study, why not take notes in class and practice more after class? Learn to relax！Take a long walk before the exam. You love basketball but your parents asked you to stop it because they want you to pay more attention to your study. If I were you, I’d talk with them instead of arguing with them.
I hope what I said could help you.
Best wishes,
Joe

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者主要寫為什么寫信給Simon,Simon的煩惱是什么和他給Simon的建議。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，還用到了虛擬語(yǔ)氣。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如used to be ，get along well with ，communicate with，as for，take a long walk， pay more attention to,instead of 等短語(yǔ)，虛擬語(yǔ)氣 If I were you, I’d talk with them instead of arguing with them.，文中還用到了賓語(yǔ)從句 I’m sorry to hear that you have had so much trouble since you got into Grade 3.。文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。