Question

在班內(nèi)，同學(xué)們就“青少年是否該吸煙”展開了討論。討論結(jié)果如下：

人數(shù)	觀點	理由
80%	反對	危害身體健康；一旦成癮，很難戒除；影響他人健康等。
20%	贊成	深處重壓時，可以緩解壓力；一種時尚，感覺很酷……

請根據(jù)表格寫一篇短文，并表明自己的觀點。
要求：1.字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。
2.根據(jù)提示可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，但要保持流暢連貫。開頭已給出。
Recently, we had a discussion about whether adolescents should smoke cigarettes.

Answer 1

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Recently, we had a discussion about whether adolescents should smoke cigarettes.
On one hand, about 20% of the students agree that adolescents smoke cigarettes. In their opinion, smoking can help them ease their pressure when they are under heavy stress. Besides, smoking is fashionable and it feels cool to smoke in front of other peers.
However, on the other hand , about 80% object to it.  They think smoking does great damage to their body; Once they are addicted to it, it ‘ll be rough to quit it. What’s more, smoking also has a harmful effect on others, non-smokers in particular. More importantly, if you are a heavy smoker, you’ll smell terrible. That’s why sometimes you find it difficult to communicate with others.
As far as I’m concerned, adolescents should not get into the bad habit of smoking. That’s because it does no good to our physical and mental health in the long term.

試題分析：英語寫作是一個人英語綜合水平的體現(xiàn)。本篇寫作題材是社會現(xiàn)象的兩種不同觀點。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，四段：第一段為總述；第二段正方觀點及依據(jù)；第三段反方觀點及依據(jù)；第四段自己觀點。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時要盡量使語言多樣化；2.自我觀點表達(dá)時要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思�？忌鷳�(yīng)明白高考書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力。
點評：考生應(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。