Question

假如你是李華，校園小記者就孩子與家長關(guān)系調(diào)查結(jié)果----大多數(shù)孩子都不愿意與家長交流，不愿意告訴家長內(nèi)心想法的問題來采訪你。
1.請你介紹你同學(xué)中與家長之間的不和諧狀況并分析原因。
2.表明你所希望的孩子與家長的關(guān)系，并說明如何才能建立這種關(guān)系。
注意：1、詞數(shù)不少于120個；
2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

Nowadays, most of my classmates aren’t willing to communicate with their parents or share their inner thoughts with their parents and always find it hard to seek support and advice from them, the reason of which is that they feel that they are not equal in position and parents lay too much emphasis on the children’s study.
In my opinion, the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which parents and children are equal and they can show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind , parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their teachers and give voice to their inner feelings frankly. Only in this way can we enjoy a warm relationship between parents and children.

試題分析：考查了半開放性作文的寫作。本文是關(guān)于孩子與家長之間的交流的話題，文章中并沒有給出很多的要點，要考生自行組織要點，可以簡述這種同學(xué)與家長之間的不和諧狀況。并解釋原因，從家長方面和孩子方面兩方面入手。最后要描述你所希望的孩子與家長的關(guān)系，并給出之間的建議，如家長和老師溝通，做學(xué)生的朋友等。
點評：本文難度較大，在寫作時注意上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。