Question

升入高中后的第一個(gè)寒假即到來(lái)。為了讓同學(xué)們都能過(guò)上一個(gè)充實(shí)而有意義的假期，你向班級(jí)同學(xué)發(fā)起了倡議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇詞數(shù)為100詞左右的文章。文章開(kāi)頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
要點(diǎn): 1. 注重體驗(yàn)：用手中的畫(huà)筆和照相機(jī)記錄下社會(huì)中的美與丑。
2. 注重嘗試：幫父母做一道菜；做家教輔導(dǎo)低年級(jí)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)等。
3. 你的打算......
參考詞匯： 畫(huà)筆：a paintbrush      家教：tutor 
With the approaching of the first winter vacation in senior high, I call on all my classmates to enjoy a fulfilled and instructive holiday.

Answer 1

With the approaching of the first winter vacation in senior high, I call on all my classmates to enjoy a fulfilled and instructive holiday.  First, learn to experience. With our paintbrushes and cameras we can take the streets, drawing and photographing what we see. Good or bad phenomena as we may see, we will always believe society is developing better and better. Second, learn to have a try. As winter vacation provides us with more free time, why not have a try at cooking? Enjoying the food cooked by ourselves, you are sure to feel the pride and happiness. Besides, being a tutor will also bring us a lot---- most treasured experience and some pocket money. What’s more, start reading books, which will broaden the range of your knowledge. So, my dear classmates, work out your holiday plans and I'm sure you will have an unforgettable vacation.

試題分析：本文是應(yīng)用文中常見(jiàn)的倡議書(shū)。話(huà)題是讓同學(xué)們都能過(guò)上一個(gè)充實(shí)而有意義的假期有很強(qiáng)的可寫(xiě)性，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，但只是一個(gè)提綱，考生還需要做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，讓文章更有文采。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文是一封倡議書(shū)。具有很強(qiáng)的可寫(xiě)性，內(nèi)容貼近考生的實(shí)際情況，考生有話(huà)可說(shuō)，有話(huà)可寫(xiě)。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中要注意使用合適的連接詞如，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級(jí)的解析如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。