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上周開始，老師和家長(zhǎng)都要李明住校學(xué)習(xí)，而他卻喜歡住在家里，雙方各持己見。假設(shè)你是李明，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)把這個(gè)情況告訴給中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)某欄目組，請(qǐng)求主持人給予建議。

老師和家長(zhǎng)的理由	李明的理由
1．方便問(wèn)問(wèn)題； 2．晚自習(xí)時(shí)間更能保證； 3．培養(yǎng)獨(dú)立生活的能力。	1．晚上有更多自習(xí)時(shí)間； 2. 學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容可以自由支配。 ……

注意：1．詞數(shù)：120字左右；           2．信的開頭已寫好；
3．參考詞句：住校board（v.）；方便做…… It’s convenient to…；分歧disagreement
Dear Sir,
I’m a student of Senior 1. I am writing to ask you for some advice.                              
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
Yours,  
Li Ming 

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
I’m a student of Senior 1. I am writing to ask you for some advice.
Since last week, my parents and teachers have kept asking me to board in the school. They say it will be very convenient for me to ask questions whenever and wherever. Besides, they think boarding will make it possible to make full use of my night time, and that I can also develop the ability to look after myself.
However, I have my own thoughts. If staying at home in the evening, I will have more time to work at my lessons. At the same time, I can learn what I think I’m not good at. I really don’t know how to deal with the disagreement between us. Can you give me your advice?
Yours,
Li Ming

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái). 不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá). 平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢，多用詞組和句型：make full use of充分利用，deal with處理， They say it will be very convenient for me to ask questions whenever and wherever. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， they think boarding will make it possible to make full use of my night time, and that I can also develop the ability to look after myself.這句話用了it做形式賓語(yǔ)， If staying at home in the evening, I will have more time to work at my lessons. 這句話用了省略句，At the same time, I can learn what I think I’m not good at. 這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句。還有范文還使用了Besides讓文章更加連貫。