Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
Nowadays, " the sense of happiness" has been repeatedly mentioned in various medias.  CCTV did a nation-wide survey by asking random passers-by： " Are you happy now? What exactly is happiness in your eyes?" The survey aroused a heated discussion across the country and people from all walks of life expressed their opinions.
" I would say I'm pretty happy at present because my dear daughter has graduated from college and found herself a decent job. " said a woman in her fifties with a big smile on her face.
Though it seemed that most people said they were happy, different voices were still heard and should not be ignored. A migrant worker’s(農(nóng)民工) reply was  "My family name is Zeng", showing his  determination to refuse the interview as well as his annoyance to mention happiness.
The brand-new Chinese Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan answered " I don't know " in an interview when he was asked the same question.
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
1.以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。
2.以約120個(gè)詞就“幸�！钡脑掝}談?wù)勀愕南敕�，�?nèi)容包括：
（1）目前你是否感到幸福及其原因；
（2）請(qǐng)描述到現(xiàn)在為止讓你覺(jué)得最幸福的一件事情；
（3）談?wù)勀銓?duì)幸福的理解。
【寫(xiě)作要求】
1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事．也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫。

Answer 1

When asked by the CCTV whether they were happy, most people gave a positive answer while some didn't. The Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan said he didn't know whether he was happy or not.
At present, I am pretty happy because I am doing what I like and I like what I am doing. As a Senior Three student, I am studying hard every day and live it to the fullest. It is good to work with my determined classmates to fulfill our dreams.
When I recall the happy things which happened to me, the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped them all. It was a time when my family was going through extreme financial difficulties. So I made up my mind to win the scholarship, hoping to lighten my parents' financial burden. After making tons of painstaking efforts, I succeeded. At the ceremony, I could see my mom was the most poorly-dressed woman, yet with the brightest smile. It was the happiest thing ever happening to me that I will treasure for the rest of my life.
As far as I am concerned, happiness lies in the effort of making those we love smile. When we bring them happiness , it gives happiness to ourselves.

試題分析：考查議論文寫(xiě)作。本文的話題是“幸福”；考生直接表達(dá)自己對(duì)于目前的情況是否感覺(jué)到幸福，同時(shí)說(shuō)明自己的具體的原因�？忌�可以從自己生活中尋找一個(gè)讓自己感覺(jué)幸福的事例來(lái)展開(kāi)說(shuō)明自己對(duì)幸福的理解；幸福其實(shí)就是一種自我價(jià)值的實(shí)現(xiàn)。要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意題目要求必須使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。