Question

Some years ago, leaving the farm to work in the city, three brothers were employed by the same company and on the same pay. But three years later, they received different wages. So their father was confused and decided to pay a visit to the boss, who told him that he would let his sons explain for themselves.
The three brothers were asked by the supervisor to go to the airport to get a cargo inventory at different times. Jim, who received 500 dollars a month, got the information on the phone instead of going to the airport himself. Frank, the 1000 dollars a month brother with a list of more cargoes. George, the 1500 dollars a month brother came back with detailed information and also did something extra without being told.
1．概括該故事的內(nèi)容要點，該部分的字數(shù)大約30詞左右；
2．就“態(tài)度決定一切”這個主題發(fā)表你的看法，至少包含以下的內(nèi)容要點，該部分的字數(shù)大約120詞左右。
1）你認為是什么導(dǎo)致三兄弟的薪酬差異;
2）你從這個故事得到什么啟示;
3）你對 “態(tài)度決定一切”如何理解?
4) 舉一對比事例說明不同的學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度產(chǎn)生不同的結(jié)果。
你可以使用實例可其他論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子。

Answer 1

Three brothers, who worked for the same company , received different wages due to their different attitudes towards their work, which shows right attitude is of great help to one’s life.
Their different attitudes towards their work result in their different wages. From the story I can conclude that those who take positive attitude towards work will be rewarded.
Different attitudes lead to different results. Take Xiao Hua as an example. He is my classmate. Not only does he put his heart into study but he is also helpful both to teachers and students. So he has become a top student in our class, even in the grade. With his diligence and concentration, he is bound to succeed in entering his ideal university. However, Xiao Li, also my classmate, never cares about his study because he is addicted to playing games, he turns a deaf ear to the teachers’ advice. As a result, he falls far behind others in his study.
In my opinion, attitude is everything. No matter what you do, you must do it well even if you may fail many times. Sooner or later you will be rewarded for your positive attitude towards your work or life.

試題分析：首先概括該故事的內(nèi)容要點，故事的概括要簡練，不要照抄原文。進而找到中心論點：態(tài)度決定一切。（即故事的啟示），然后舉例論述文章觀點，舉一對比事例說明不同的學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度產(chǎn)生不同的結(jié)果，最后陳述自己的觀點（結(jié)論）
點評：觀點類議論文的寫作的文章總體結(jié)構(gòu)：
一·概括所給短文內(nèi)容要點
二·過渡詞引出主題句文章觀點句
三·舉例論述文章觀點
四.自己的觀點（結(jié)論）