Question

眾所周知，這些年我國經(jīng)濟發(fā)展迅速，可是環(huán)境污染也越來越嚴重，發(fā)展經(jīng)濟與環(huán)境保護之間的關系問題一直為社會各界所關注。下面是某班同學的討論結果，請你就此給某英文報社寫一封信介紹討論情況并簡要闡述自己的觀點。
1. 一些同學認為經(jīng)濟發(fā)展不應以環(huán)境為代價。
理由：忽視環(huán)境而發(fā)展經(jīng)濟將對環(huán)境造成破壞。列舉一些嚴重的環(huán)境問題。
2. 一些同學認為經(jīng)濟發(fā)展不應考慮環(huán)境問題。
理由：發(fā)展經(jīng)濟必然帶來環(huán)境問題，環(huán)境問題是經(jīng)濟發(fā)展的副產(chǎn)品，等以后有了錢和時間再來解決。
3. 你的個人觀點……
注意：1. 信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2. 詞數(shù)：150左右；
3. 參考詞匯：不可避免的unavoidable 副產(chǎn)品by-product
以……為代價at the cost of/ sacrifice …for …
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about the relationship between economic development and environmental protection.
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Answer 1

Dear editor
I am writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about the relationship between economic development and environment protection.
Some students believe we should never sacrifice environment for economy. They think the present environmental problems are largely caused by rapid economic development. For example, farmable land is decreasing because of the industrial development and the development of cities.
However, other students think it unnecessary to consider environmental problems now and economic development comes first. They believe that environmental problems are only the by-products of economic development, which are unavoidable. They can be dealt with later when we have the time and money.
I think the second view is completely wrong. The purpose of economic development is to provide a comfortable and happy life for our people. We should aim at sustainable development and a balance between the two.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：本題是一篇材料作文。要求向英文報社寫一封信，介紹討論發(fā)展與環(huán)保的結果。學生比較熟悉書信格式，作文要點已經(jīng)給出�？梢苑譃槿�段，第一段支持環(huán)保；第二段支持發(fā)展；第三段給出自己的觀點。作文必須包含所有要點，所給參考詞匯必須用上，否則會扣分。注意句與句之間，段與段之間的銜接要自然。
【亮點說明】范文使用了第一人稱，比較有禮貌。范文條理清晰，邏輯明確，很好的表達了討論的結果和自己的觀點。I am writing to tell you about...是寫信常用的開頭格式。范文交替使用believe和think來表達觀點，避免了重復。范文使用For example, However等來連接前后文，使文章顯得自然流暢；范文使用了較多的語法知識，像被動語態(tài)are largely caused by和be dealt with；定語從句we’ve had about the relationship...和which are unavoidable；固定句型think it unnecessary to...和provide...for sb及The purpose of...is to；賓語從句believe that...；時間狀語從句when we have the time and money；范文使用never和only來加強語氣，更能突出作者的態(tài)度和觀點；范文也使用了短語because of和aim at等，使文章內(nèi)容充實。