Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格提示，寫(xiě)一篇120詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，并闡明自己從中得到的啟發(fā)。

時(shí)間	2006年9月28日
地點(diǎn)	美國(guó)佛羅里達(dá)州（Florida）
事件	超過(guò)二十一萬(wàn)名中學(xué)生參加一項(xiàng)集體朗誦活動(dòng)
結(jié)果	締造不同地點(diǎn)、同時(shí)（simultaneously）大聲朗讀同一篇文章的吉尼斯世界記錄
意義	培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的閱讀興趣和合作精神
對(duì)你的啟發(fā)	……

Answer 1

On September 28, 2006, more than 210,000 middle school students in Florida took part in a reading activity, successfully breaking the Guinness World Record for the “Most People Reading Aloud Simultaneously in Multiple Locations”.
This event not only developed students’ interest in reading but also taught them the importance of cooperation. With the help of their teachers, they eventually achieved their goal and won a place in the Guinness Book of World Records.
It reminds me that as students, we should have big dreams, but we must realize that only through hard work and cooperation can we succeed in the end.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文的特點(diǎn)是句式多變，On September 28, 2006, more than 210,000 middle school students in Florida took part in a reading activity, successfully breaking the Guinness World Record for the “Most People Reading Aloud Simultaneously in Multiple Locations”.這句話(huà)用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)， This event not only developed students’ interest in reading but also taught them the importance of cooperation. 這句話(huà)用了not only…but also…結(jié)構(gòu)， It reminds me that as students, we should have big dreams, but we must realize that only through hard work and cooperation can we succeed in the end.說(shuō)句話(huà)用了賓語(yǔ)從句和倒裝句。