Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
作為一名中學(xué)生，假設(shè)名叫李濤，你對(duì)部分同學(xué)沉迷于玩電子游戲（video game）的現(xiàn)象很著急，在此你向一家英文報(bào)社編輯部寫(xiě)一封信，闡述了玩電子游戲的害處及你的建議。
（詞數(shù)要求100-110）
Dear editor,
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                              

Answer 1

Dear editor,
Now video games are very popular among the school students, some students are so interested in the game that they spend all day playing. Sometimes they forget to do their homework and some even play truant. Each time they have to pay much money. In order to play video games they often ask their parents for money, borrow or steal money from their classmates, which has brought out very bad effects.
Too much video games playing needs time, money and energy. The sellers benefit a lot but it’s not good for the students’ study and health.
I do hope measures will be taken by the government to prevent students from playing video games.
Yours sincerely,
Li Tao

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