Question

近幾年中小學(xué)生近視人數(shù)大幅增加，據(jù)報(bào)道多達(dá)30%—50%的中小學(xué)生戴眼鏡，而且這一數(shù)字還在呈上升趨勢(shì)。保護(hù)視力必須得到廣泛重視。
你作為一名學(xué)生，請(qǐng)根據(jù)自身體會(huì)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)保護(hù)視力的短文。詞數(shù)100詞左右，短文的標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1、綜述中小學(xué)生的視力現(xiàn)狀。
2、分析造成學(xué)生近視的主要原因。
3、介紹視力保護(hù)的簡(jiǎn)便方法。
Take Good Care of Eyes
In recent years more and more school students have become near-sighted... _________
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Answer 1

Take Good Care of Eyes
In recent years more and more school students have become near-sighted. It is reported that as high as 30 to 50 percent of the students wear glasses and the number is still increasing. We should pay great attention to this problem.
As we know, there are some different causes for near-sightedness. Students always have too much homework to do every day. They have to spend a lot of time doing their home-work. Besides, some of them watch TV overmuch. Others play video games or chat on line for a long time. All this will do harm to their eyes.
As students, we must try our best to take care of our eyes; therefore we should form a good habit of reading, do eyesight exercises regularly and never wear out our eyes.

試題分析：本文的是一則半開(kāi)放性作文，話題是保護(hù)視力，首先我們要說(shuō)明現(xiàn)在中小學(xué)生的視力現(xiàn)狀，很多學(xué)生都已經(jīng)近視了。而且比例很高。主要原因在于用眼不衛(wèi)生，過(guò)度用眼，作業(yè)量太大，過(guò)多的看電視，玩游戲。關(guān)于保護(hù)視力的方法，首先我們要注意正確用眼的方式，其次要養(yǎng)成良好的用眼習(xí)慣，少看電視，少玩游戲。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。