Question

目前，越來越多的中學(xué)生因各種原因不吃早餐。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格所提供的信息，就此現(xiàn)象寫一篇英語短文，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?br />

原因	大部分學(xué)生認(rèn)為早晨時(shí)間太緊，一部分覺得沒食欲，還有一些女生減肥
后果	沒精力，上課注意力不集中，記憶力下降，不但不能減肥，還會(huì)增加體重
你的觀點(diǎn)	……

注意：1.短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.短文開頭已寫好， 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3.詞數(shù)；120詞左右；
4. 參考詞匯；集中注意 concentrate on.

Answer 1

One possible version :
Many students have no time for breakfast while others aren’t hungry in the morning. Some girls skip breakfast to lose weight.
Studies have shown skipping breakfast will affect our studies. If we don’t have breakfast, we will have not enough energy to focus on our study. Besides we will also have a poor memory and do poorly in exams. For those girls who want to lose weight, skipping breakfast will actually make them put on weight because they will be hungry and eat too much for lunch.
In my opinion we should get up earlier and allow time for a nutritious breakfast, which will improve our ability to learn and will also help to build up our body. Having a good breakfast means having a good day.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，討論的話題是不吃早餐的情況分析。要點(diǎn)基本上都給了出來，可數(shù)在個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)方面要做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，你的意見應(yīng)該是要吃早餐，因?yàn)槌栽绮陀泻芏嗟暮锰�，從學(xué)習(xí)健康等各方面進(jìn)行闡述。我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。