Question

閱讀下面的一則通訊稿，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
Recently many advisers have called for reforms of the English language testing system to make it more effective in developing actual language ability.
"Currently, the English testing system in China puts too much pressure on students to get high marks and ignores the development of their comprehensive（綜合的）language abilities," they said.
"Some changes in the evaluation procedures of English examinations are necessary for the sound development of the national English education system," others added.
[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]
假設(shè)你班最近要進(jìn)行一次英語(yǔ)主題班會(huì)，就上述文章中談及的話(huà)題進(jìn)行討論，請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備一篇發(fā)言稿，以下是發(fā)言稿的內(nèi)容（開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好）：
1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括和分析上述話(huà)題的主要內(nèi)容；
2. 以約120個(gè)詞就這一話(huà)題發(fā)表自己的看法，并包括如下要點(diǎn)：
(1) 你是否贊成通訊稿中人們的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。
(2) 至少呈現(xiàn)三條理由來(lái)支撐自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。
(3) 對(duì)于“How to develop comprehensive language ability”，提出你認(rèn)為最重要的一條途徑。
[寫(xiě)作要求]
1.作文中可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接抄用原文中的句子;
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。
Dear classmates,
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Personally, ____________________________________________________________________________________________
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As to the development of comprehensive language abilities, __________________________
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That’s all. I appreciate your attention.

Answer 1

Dear classmates,
Recently, the topic of whether English should be tested in a reformed way has been heatedly discussed. Many believe the current evaluation procedures hinder students’ comprehensive abilities and therefore argue for a reform.
Personally, I am against this point of view. There are numerous reasons why I think so, but today I would only explore some of them. Firstly, I don’t think our comprehensive abilities are hindered. To my knowledge, many of my classmates are good at all the four skills of English. Moreover, the current testing system is nothing but the fairest way for students to get selected for college study. Admittedly, there is pressure nowadays. But who can guarantee a new testing method will spare us from pressure?
As to the development of comprehensive language abilities, I believe the only solution is we students practice more, either listening and reading or speaking and writing. Only in this way can we learn English in an effective way. That’s all. I appreciate your attention.（152 words）

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)寫(xiě)作，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認(rèn)真看清題目要求，這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)給了一段材料：先要求以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個(gè)詞寫(xiě)一篇短文，按照要點(diǎn)去表達(dá)，不能有遺漏，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫(xiě)作時(shí)盡量使用自己會(huì)的單詞、詞組和句型，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級(jí)語(yǔ)法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章簡(jiǎn)潔的總結(jié)了所給材料，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫，文章使用了高級(jí)詞匯和短語(yǔ)：hinder，argue for ，To my knowledge, nothing but ，spare sb. from sth，還有復(fù)雜的句式：Recently, the topic of whether English should be tested in a reformed way has been heatedly discussed. 這句話(huà)用了賓語(yǔ)從句， There are numerous reasons why I think so,這句話(huà)用了定語(yǔ)從句， Only in this way can we learn English in an effective way.這句話(huà)用了倒裝句，還有文章還使用了 Firstly, Moreover,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。