Question

Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，描述圖片內(nèi)容，并以生活中發(fā)生的一件事情說(shuō)明圖片所說(shuō)明的內(nèi)涵。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于120。

Answer 1

In the picture, two goats are tied to each other with a rope. They both see some grass in opposite directions, and try to pull to get their own food. They are unsuccessful, because the rope is too short to allow them to eat the food at the same time. However, if they decide to cooperate and eat the grass on the left first, and then the grass on the right, they will both be able to get their food.
Several days ago, two of my friends had a fierce quarrel. Both of them hold their own view without considering the other’s. One of them wanted to go to the bookshop first, while the other wanted to finish their project first. Later, I gave them a suggestion that they should go to the book shop first, where they could not only buy the book, but also find some useful information, which might help the other better their project.
Therefore, cooperation is better than conflict. Remember that sometimes our goal is not that only we get something and the other gets nothing, but that all people get what they want. All in all, only good cooperation will benefit everyone.

試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文主題明確，夾敘夾議，在語(yǔ)言上用了一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)not only…but also不但…而且…，All in all,總的來(lái)說(shuō)。句式上也是富有變化：because the rope is too short to allow them to eat the food at the same time. 這句話用了too …to…結(jié)構(gòu)，One of them wanted to go to the bookshop first, while the other wanted to finish their project first. 這句話用了while表示對(duì)比，Later, I gave them a suggestion that they should go to the book shop first, where they could not only buy the book, but also find some useful information, which might help the other better their project. 這句話用了同位語(yǔ)從句，非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。Remember that sometimes our goal is not that only we get something and the other gets nothing, but that all people get what they want.這句話用了not..but…結(jié)構(gòu)，和表語(yǔ)從句。