Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。
You cannot change the weather, but you can change your mood.
注意：①無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

The weather depends on the sky, but whether you are happy or not depends on yourself.
I can well remember that I didn’t pass the Chinese exam several times last year, so the weater of my sky seemed to be full of clouds. Although the songs of birds were very nice and the flowers were very beautiful, they could not let me escape from depression. What’s more, I felt that I was laughed at by all the other classmates. My Chinese teacher noticed my subtle difference, so she gave me some advice and told me to change my attitude. With the help of her, I tried to face the trouble with a positive attitude. To my surprise, everything changed. It was not long before I made great progress in my Chinese.
Life is full of difficulties. Sometimes you may not be able to decide the situation you are in, but you can change your attitude.

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給提示，結(jié)合生活事例寫一篇短文。首先要理解所給提示的意思；其次可以結(jié)合自己生活中的例子進(jìn)行寫作，注意不得照抄提示語(yǔ)。使用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作，注意不要出現(xiàn)拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。要正確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句、倒裝等語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。
亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：范文使用了較多的固定搭配和固定短語(yǔ)：depends on, be full of, escape from, laughed at, told me to change my attitude, With the help of her, tried to, To my surprise, long before, made great progress in等，使作文內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)，有說(shuō)服力；
范文還使用了一些重要的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)：讓步狀語(yǔ)從句Although the songs of birds were very nice...；表語(yǔ)從句I felt that I was laughed at by all the other classmates；定語(yǔ)從句the situation you are in等，這些長(zhǎng)難句都是亮點(diǎn)，也是加分點(diǎn)；
范文注意使用so, What’s more, With the help of her, To my surprise等來(lái)銜接上下文，使作文語(yǔ)意連貫、銜接緊密。