Question

假設(shè)你是校報英文版的編輯李華。上周，你校心理俱樂部進(jìn)行了一場活動，調(diào)查同學(xué)們遇到不開心的事情時一般向誰傾訴。請你用英語寫一篇短文把這次調(diào)查情況刊登在你所負(fù)責(zé)的欄目中。調(diào)查結(jié)果如下表：

傾訴對象	比例	理由
朋友、同學(xué)	55%	同齡人容易溝通
網(wǎng)友、筆友	15%	現(xiàn)實生活里沒見過，有安全感
老師、父母	25%	有經(jīng)驗，能提供好的建議
無	5%	不想告訴任何人

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右； 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭已寫好。

Last week, the psychological intervention club in our school carried out a survey about ______________________________________________________________________.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Last week, the psychological intervention club in our school carried out a survey about whom the students would most like to talk to when they are feeling unhappy. Here are the results.

55% of the students surveyed named their friends or classmates, who, being of the same age, are likely to think the same way about something. Another 15% would talk to their e-pals or pen-pals. They thought that talking to those friends would give them a sense of security, since probably they would never meet each other in reality. Still another 25% would choose their teachers or parents, because of their rich experience or practical suggestions, which would help them solve their problems. Only 5% of them would close their hearts, for they said they seldom communicate with others, and have few friends. 

(120 words)

【解析】

試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，材料是考生熟悉的東西，考生不難理解寫作的目的和要求，文章的開頭已給出�？忌�重點(diǎn)應(yīng)認(rèn)真審題，審題包括幾個方面:1.文章的時態(tài)2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的把握準(zhǔn)確到位。3.考生要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。

4.考生注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢。

考點(diǎn)：這是一篇記敘文

點(diǎn)評：動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作練習(xí)之外，還可以適當(dāng)背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。