Question

假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，不久前在學(xué)校舉辦的英語(yǔ)競(jìng)賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)。校報(bào)請(qǐng)你寫一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介紹你課外學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文：

1.參加英語(yǔ)角的益處；

2.堅(jiān)持寫英語(yǔ)日記的作用；

3.英文閱讀網(wǎng)站（Enjoy Reading）對(duì)你的幫助。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120-150；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)， 以使行文連貫。

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                

 

Answer 1

【答案】

My experience of learning English after class

I'm glad i have won the first prize in the English Contest, which completely contributes to my after-class English learning.

I often take part in the English Corner and practice speaking English. There are many participants in the corner and we can talk about any topics in English. By doing this, I have improved my pronunciation and intonation. Most important of all, I have conquered my shyness and timidness. I can talk to anybody boldly in English. So I didn't feel nervous in the contest at all.

At the same time I insist on keeping diaries in English every day. I will try my best to bring what I have learnt to use. Thus my knowledge has been reviewed and enlarged.

I also visit English reading websites to read much. Learning English depends on reading widely and largely. Those sites provide many English articles of all levels and I can find appropriate ones to read. The dictionary in the computer can help me deal with the new vocabulary quickly. Therefore I benefit much from the reading.

Above are my three main learning methods of learning English after class. They are helpful and convenient to me. I hope they are also beneficial for you.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求介紹你課外學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。象范文的I will try my best to bring what I have learnt to use.就是用了what連接的賓語(yǔ)從句。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。