Question

隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來越多的人擁有了自己的汽車，你班同學(xué)就此展開了一次討論，提出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)和看法。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供的信息給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀介紹這兩種看法。
贊同者認(rèn)為：1.方便、快捷、舒適的交通工具；2.反映出國民生活條件提高，國家富強(qiáng)；3.帶動(dòng)其他行業(yè)發(fā)展。
反對(duì)者認(rèn)為：1.廢氣污染嚴(yán)重；2.過多規(guī)則影響交通，導(dǎo)致更多事故；3.停車問題日益突出。
注意：1.信的開頭已為你寫好；2.詞數(shù)：120左右；
3.參考詞匯：方便的 convenient；交通 transportation
Dear editor，
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars.
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Yours truly
Li Hue

Answer 1

Dear editor，
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars.
With the development of people’s living conditions，more and more people have their own cars. Some of us think it good to own a car. Firstly，it’s a convenient，fast and comfortable means of transportation tool. You can go to a lot of places at any time. Secondly，it shows that people are becoming richer，and the country stronger. It also makes businesses and industries develop faster. Others have different opinions. They think that cars give off waste gas and pollute the environment. Too many cars will have some bad effects，such as more accidents. Besides，parking cars is another big problem. Maybe people should think carefully before they buy a car.
Yours truly，
Li Hua

試題分析：本篇寫作題材是對(duì)于越來越多的人擁有了自己的汽車的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，四段：第一段為總述；第二段正方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；第三段反方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；第四段自己觀點(diǎn)。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語言多樣化；2.自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思。考生應(yīng)明白高考書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：考生應(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。