Question

目前，我國大力提倡構建節(jié)約型社會。下圖是你在校園所見到的一些現(xiàn)象，假如你是學生會主席，請起草一份英文倡議書，描述這些現(xiàn)象，并向全校師生發(fā)出倡議，杜絕浪費，節(jié)約能源。

注意：1.可根據(jù)需要補充與文章有關的信息。
2.詞數(shù)120左右。
3.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear teachers and students,
Our government is trying hard to build an energy-saving society.                  
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Students’ Union

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear teachers and students,
Our government is trying hard to build an energy-saving society. It is everybody’s duty to help reach this goal.
However, not everybody has realized the importance of it. For example, sometimes lights and computers are still on after class. Some students even forget to turn off the tap after using it and have water running all the time. Usually only one side of our paper is used, causing much waste.
It’s time we did something to avoid this kind of waste. Firstly, make sure that all the lights and other electric facilities are turned off when we leave the rooms. Remember to turn off the tap immediately after using it. What’s more, paper should be printed or written on both sides.
In a word, if everybody has the awareness of reducing waste and saving energy, we can contribute to our society.
Students’ Union

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，談論的是杜絕浪費，節(jié)約能源�？磮D作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達出來，除了能表達清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時間、地點、人物、事件的起因、過程、結果這六個要素；如果是說明文或議論文，考生則首先要對圖畫的內(nèi)容進行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進行說明或議論。此時考生一定要注意把握圖畫的中心思想，寫出圖畫要反映的內(nèi)容。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點說明】It is everybody’s duty to help reach this goal.這是it做形式主語的用法，Usually only one side of our paper is used, causing much waste.這句話是現(xiàn)在分詞做結果狀語，It’s time we did something to avoid this kind of waste.這句話用的是It is time加從句的虛擬語氣，F(xiàn)or example,firstly，what’s more等關聯(lián)詞用的也很好。