Question

書面表達(dá)（共15分）
根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容，以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter” 為題，用英語寫一篇120-150詞左右的短文。短文須包括以下要點，不得逐條翻譯。

1、簡單描述漫畫的內(nèi)容；
2、作業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)過重；
3、精講精練；
4、參加體育鍛煉和社會活動。
We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter
The picture shows______________________________________________________________

Answer 1

We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter
The picture shows that a girl is wearing a pair of glasses and carrying a big heavy schoolbag, and that a woman is doing some exercise. The girl says to the woman, “If you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure you will lose some weight.”
As is well-known, we Chinese students are overburdened with lessons and homework which our teachers have given us. All that we can do every day is to listen to our teachers’ lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless.
We do hope that our teachers will help us get more knowledge with fewer lectures, exercises and less homework. Only in this way will we have spare time to do more physical exercise and make us stronger, and we will have more free time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all healthier mentally and physically.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖寫作，做題時：1. 認(rèn)真讀圖，可知圖畫體現(xiàn)了學(xué)習(xí)過程中作業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)過重的問題，2. 初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語、句型和時態(tài)。3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容。4. 反復(fù)審核，修改錯誤。5. 注意所給的漢語提示。一般說來，看圖寫話中的漢語提示往往給定了有關(guān)的時間、地點、人物等相關(guān)的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息。
點評：在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容。這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)。然后再將各圖的單個句子串連起來。串連時，要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞語或過渡性語句，不至于讓讀者覺得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。