Question

很多人都止步于成功前的一步，他們往往在這條路上走了一段，當(dāng)看不到成功的彼岸時(shí)，就選擇放棄這條路，尋找其他的出路。殊不知，成功就在他們選擇放棄的一步之遙。請(qǐng)閱讀下面的漫畫，按要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。

內(nèi)容要求：
1．描述漫畫內(nèi)容；
2．分析漫畫所要表達(dá)的人生哲理；
3．談?wù)勗撀�畫給你的啟示。
注意：
1．短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞
2．考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫；
3．詞數(shù)1 20左右；
4．文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具信息。
Many people fail in life because they do not realize how close they are to success when they give up．
In  this  pictur，we can
see                                      
                                                      
                                                                              

Answer 1

Many people fail in life because they do not realize how close they are to success when they give up.
In this picture, we can see a man is cutting earth in a tunnel, hoping to find some diamonds. He makes great efforts in his work. However, after a long time of pains without gains, he decides to give up. With one or two more attempts of cutting, he would have seen those diamonds right in front of him.
This story tells us a very simple but important piece of truth: we should be confident in what we have chosen to do and never stop our efforts until we succeed.
As a student preparing for the entrance examinations, I should learn a lesson from the man. Just like the diamonds in the picture, success is just waiting for my last efforts. I have been cutting earth for so many years, so I will never give up before I succeed.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，要求根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文。寫作時(shí)要抓住圖畫的內(nèi)容也要從圖畫的表面看到它深層的含義，可以結(jié)合所給的提示進(jìn)行論述，也可以適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文準(zhǔn)確的詮釋了漫畫的內(nèi)容，也對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行闡述，遣詞造句方面也很注意，如詞組：give up 放棄，be confident in 對(duì)…自信，還有一些句型：we can see a man is cutting earth in a tunnel, hoping to find some diamonds. He makes great efforts in his work. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)， With one or two more attempts of cutting, he would have seen those diamonds right in front of him.這句話用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣， we should be confident in what we have chosen to do and never stop our efforts until we succeed. 這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句， As a student preparing for the entrance examinations, I should learn a lesson from the man. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做定語(yǔ)。