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假定你是李華，在一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上， 你看到一個(gè)名叫Grown-up的中學(xué)生發(fā)帖(post)尋求幫助，請(qǐng)根據(jù)帖子的內(nèi)容、寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和要求回帖。

Grown-up        Post at 20-11-2011  21:18                             1#

Hi, everyone, I’m a Senior Grade Three student, and I am suffering from mental pressure these days, what should I do?                                                                            TOP

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寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1.  告訴Grown-up心理壓力不可避免； 2. 告訴Grown-up心里壓力的危害； 
3. 建議Grown-up應(yīng)正確面對(duì)心理壓力；4. 介紹你面對(duì)心里壓力時(shí)所采取的措施。
注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右。2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3. 文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Hi, Grown-up,
It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life.______________________
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Hope my ideas will work.

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Hi, Grown-up,                                                          
It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life. In my opinion, everyone will meet some mental pressure in their life. But if it lasts a long time, it may do harm to our body.
Whenever I meet pressure, I try to keep calm and think how to overcome it. Sometimes it is very effective. When I’m stressed out, I listen to music or do some sports. After that, I often find that my moods become much better. If I can’t overcome it, I will turn to my parents, teachers or good friends.
To sum up, we should face pressure bravely and overcome it actively. 
Hope my ideas will work.

本文是關(guān)于高三學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)壓力的文章，這個(gè)話題是學(xué)生所分詞熟悉的話題，具體很強(qiáng)的可寫(xiě)性，同時(shí)這也是一篇半開(kāi)放性的作文，要點(diǎn)給的并不全，給了考生教大的發(fā)揮余地。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中注意使用合適的連接詞如：To sum up等；也要使用一些高級(jí)的句型如強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，狀語(yǔ)從句等，讓文章更有層次性。