Question

假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Julia 來信告訴你她想和幾個同學(xué)開一家網(wǎng)上書店，并想征求你的意見。請根據(jù)以下要點給Julia 寫一封回信。
表示贊成并說明好處：可以學(xué)會理財、加強與人溝通、自己看書更方便等；
分析劣勢：占用較多時間、經(jīng)驗不足、對市場不了解等；
提出建議。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)：100左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫；
3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Julia,
I was very happy to receive your letter telling me about your plan of opening an online bookstore with some classmates. _________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Julia,
I was very happy to receive your letter telling me about your plan of opening an online bookstore with some classmates.
It would be a great idea because you can learn how to manage money and how to communicate with others effectively. Besides, it will be easier for you to read new books so that you can learn more. However, opening an online bookstore will take up a lot of your spare time. Apart from this, you have little experience in the field and if you don’t know what books are in demand, you may lose some money.
I think you should do some research first and learn how to run an online bookstore. What’s more, you’d better do the business during holidays. I am looking forward to hearing from you again.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

這是一封回信，文章的要點已經(jīng)基本給出，時態(tài)為現(xiàn)在時為主，同學(xué)們基本上只要需要翻譯成中文即可，要注意選擇較高級的詞匯如communicate with，take up，in demand 等，再使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞可以讓文章成為一個整體，更為流暢。