Question

假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右。
2. 參考詞匯：房租 rent (n.) 。

Dear Bob,
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Bob,
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one that I think is pretty good. It is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop and just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
It's a small flat of 25 square meters on the third floor, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
I’m expecting your coming.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：這篇文章是圖畫類寫作，要求寫信介紹住房的情況，包括住房內(nèi)部的結(jié)構(gòu)和外面的設(shè)施，要求認(rèn)真審圖，將圖介紹清楚，同時介紹細(xì)節(jié)，注意方位的表達(dá)，也要按照文體和篇章要求組織語篇。 4. 潤色，注意措辭、復(fù)雜句式及承上啟下的自然銜接，校對細(xì)節(jié)。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了好的詞組和句子： All the best!萬事如意， It is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop and just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.這句話用了定語從句，It's a small flat of 25 square meters on the third floor, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.這句話用了復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)， If not, I’ll try to find another place for you. 這句話用了省略句。