Question

高中生活是人的一生中很美好的時光，除了學(xué)業(yè)之外，我們還經(jīng)歷、感悟了許多。為了不留遺憾，在臨近畢業(yè)時，你將做些什么呢？請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文。
·要抓緊時間溫書迎考；
·要主動與對你有誤解的同學(xué)溝通；           
·要向老師父母感恩；
·其他你認為值得做的事情。
注意：
1．可適當加入細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．短文詞數(shù)：100詞左右
3. 短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)
We all value the time we spent in high school. Besides studies, there seems to be a lot I really want to do before graduation.

Answer 1

We all value the time we spent in high school. Besides studies, there seems to be a lot I really want to do before graduation.
Not wanting to leave any regret, I’ll make the best of my time to go over the lessons and make adequate preparations for the College Entrance Exam. Meanwhile, I think if of necessity have a heart-to-heart talk with whoever might have misunderstood me and smooth away the misunderstanding, for I do treasure our friendship. Above all, I’d like to express my gratitude to my teachers with those help I have made continuous progress in the past three years and my parents who have taken so good care of me. Finally, L would like to take some photos of my teachers, classmates and school, which will serve as reminders of my precious high school days.

試題分析：考查說明文中的材料類文章的寫作。要求寫短文，要點要求都已經(jīng)給出，短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。
【亮點說明】文章寫的比較簡潔，連接詞復(fù)合句的使用較為準確到位：Not wanting to leave any regret, I’ll make the best of my time to go over the lessons and make adequate preparations for the College Entrance Exam這句話放在開頭就用了分詞作狀語結(jié)構(gòu)；I think if of necessity have a heart-to-heart talk with whoever might have misunderstood me and smooth away the misunderstanding, for I do treasure our friendship.這句話用了介賓結(jié)構(gòu)以及for引導(dǎo)的原因狀語 ；I would like to take some photos of my teachers, classmates and school, which will serve as reminders of my precious high school days.這句話中的非限制性定語從句的使用恰到好處；此外，連接詞meanwhile, above all等也使得文章更加連貫。