Question

針對目前高三學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)壓力較大的現(xiàn)狀，有人以“Effective Ways to Release the Stress”為題于上周調(diào)查采訪了五個學(xué)校的500名高三學(xué)生。請你根據(jù)以下調(diào)查結(jié)果的圖表寫一份報告，并再談?wù)勛约夯蛏磉呁瑢W(xué)釋放壓力的有效方法。
參考詞匯：心理咨詢室the psychological consulting office
Effective Ways to Release the Stress
Nowadays more and more senior three students are getting stressed in their studies. ……

Answer 1

Nowadays more and more senior three students are getting stressed in their studies. In order to find out effective ways to release the stress, a survey was made last week in five schools. Altogether 500 students were interviewed, and some interesting results were as follows: About thirty-five percent of the students let out their stress by doing sports. They play football, for instance. Meanwhile, another forty—five percent of them release their stress by listening to different kinds of music. Interestingly, the rest twenty percent of them usually get help from the school psychological consulting office.
When I’m stressed, I usually do lots of physical exercise such as walking around our school playground quickly for about one hour to get myself tired at night. I find it useful for me because I’ll have a good sleep then. In this way, I’ll feel relaxed and forget all about my worries.

試題分析：本文是一篇看圖作文，同時也是議論文。討論的中心話題是釋放壓力的有效方法。在表格里主要提及了三種方法：踢足球，聽音樂以及找心理醫(yī)生。要點：1. 高三學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)壓力較大；2. 上周調(diào)查采訪了五個學(xué)校的500名高三學(xué)生；3.調(diào)查后建議采取的三種方法；4.周圍同學(xué)的減壓方法（不同的人又不同的方法）。圖表類作文對于考生的要求很高，要求考生有很強的審題能力，能根據(jù)圖表在腦海里勾勒出故事發(fā)生的始末，考生的思維量是非常大的。然后根據(jù)圖表內(nèi)容組織要點，要注意要點的完整性，不能有遺漏。在完成圖表作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。
【亮點說明】本文的亮點在于連接詞的運用不落俗套，如meanwhile, interestingly。狀語從句的運用相對較多，如Altogether 500 students were interviewed,和When I’m stressed。