Question

根據(jù)下面提示以Have a healthy lifestyle為題寫一篇短文
內(nèi)容包括：
（1）健康之重要人盡皆知
（2）許多青少年不注重健康問題 (如長(zhǎng)時(shí)間看電視，通宵上網(wǎng)聊天、玩游戲)（3）導(dǎo)致的危害
（4）你的看法和建議
注意：
1. 字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 使行文連貫。
Have a healthy lifestyle
As we all know, health is very important. _________________________________

Answer 1

Have a healthy lifestyle
As we all know, health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.
However, many teenagers don’t pay any attention to their health, especially during the holiday. And they spend too much time watching TV, playing games and chatting on the Internet all night, which is bad for their health. First, this may make them get near-sighted. Besides, their bodies become much weaker. Thirdly, they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health.
In my opinion, they should spend less time in front of the TV or the computer. Go out to take some exercise, play some sports and visit some friends and have a healthy lifestyle.

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類短文，大部分的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，只是在個(gè)人意見方面稍做發(fā)揮，可以從少看電視，多鍛煉身體，多參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)方面進(jìn)行展開敘述。提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。
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