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假設(shè)你是李華，下面海報(bào)是你校英語(yǔ)角的一次活動(dòng)安排。請(qǐng)根據(jù)海報(bào)內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一封勸說(shuō)信，勸說(shuō)你的朋友王強(qiáng)來(lái)參加此次活動(dòng)并期待他的回復(fù)。
注意：1．信件要涵蓋海報(bào)全部信息； 
　　　2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
　　　3．不得逐條翻譯海報(bào)內(nèi)容；
　　　3．詞數(shù)100左右；
　　　4．開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯： 字幕subtitle  學(xué)術(shù)報(bào)告廳lecture hall    英語(yǔ)角 English Corner

歡迎到英語(yǔ)角來(lái)看電影 Uncle Tom's Cabin 時(shí)間：11月30日下午4:30 地點(diǎn)：學(xué)術(shù)報(bào)告廳 學(xué)英語(yǔ)、交朋友的好機(jī)會(huì)； 有英文字幕文件； 　　　 有外教幫助； 　　　 免費(fèi)提供飲料。

Dear Wang Qiang,
Here is good news for you!                                                    
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Wang Qiang,
Here is good news for you! Our English Corner will show an English movie called Uncle Tom’s Cabin in my school on November 30. It’s a great movie with easy English. Don’t be afraid that you might not understand the story because there will be passages of English subtitles prepared for you and foreign teachers will be ready to help you, too. I think it’s a great chance to learn English and to make new friends, too. Besides, free drinks will be offered. The movie will be shown at the Lecture Hall at 4:30. I do hope you can come and join us for such a good opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)海報(bào)內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一封勸說(shuō)信，勸說(shuō)你的朋友王強(qiáng)來(lái)參加此次活動(dòng)并期待他的回復(fù)。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔明了，句式也富有變化： Our English Corner will show an English movie called Uncle Tom’s Cabin in my school on November 30. 這句話用了過(guò)去分詞做定語(yǔ)， Don’t be afraid that you might not understand the story because there will be passages of English subtitles prepared for you and foreign teachers will be ready to help you, too. 這句話用了原因狀語(yǔ)從句，I think it’s a great chance to learn English and to make new friends, too., 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， I do hope you can come and join us for such a good opportunity.這句話用了強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語(yǔ)， I’m looking forward to your reply. 還有文章還使用Besides這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。