Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加﹑刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用（﹨）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞的下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1）每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)。
A young man called LowCarbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He is still active in protecting the environment. He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.

Answer 1

【答案】① become-became

②去掉to

③reducing-reduce/to reduce

④she-he

⑤up -down

⑥Therefore-Besides

⑦simply-simple

⑧invention-inventions

⑨加上of

⑩去掉but

【解析】一個(gè)低碳環(huán)保主義者引起了人們的注意，他有很多環(huán)保的做法，如：一張紙正反兩面都用、看電視時(shí)調(diào)低屏幕亮度、騎自行車(chē)上班等。

①become →became 考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)后面的時(shí)態(tài)in 2011可知是過(guò)去時(shí)，用became。

②去掉to 考查介詞。Suggest doing ;suggest sb to do固定搭配，建議做某事，所以去掉to 。

③reducing→reduce 考查動(dòng)詞。Help (to)do幫助做某事，有助于某事，用reduce。

④she →he 考查代詞。根據(jù)A young man可知主人公是男的，故he 。

⑤up →down考查介詞和對(duì)文章的理解。要環(huán)保節(jié)約的做法應(yīng)該是turn down調(diào)低，而不是turn up 調(diào)高，用down。

⑥Therefore→Besides考查連詞。另外的環(huán)保做法，是補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明上文的做法，而不是結(jié)果，用Besides。

⑦simply →simple考查形容詞。修飾名詞life用形容詞，用simple 。

⑧invention→inventions 考查單復(fù)數(shù)。so many提示用復(fù)數(shù)名詞，且invention可數(shù)，用inventions。

⑨加of 考查介詞。In support of 介詞短語(yǔ)，支持，贊成，若直接用support則不用加介詞 ，所以加of。

⑩去掉but 考查連詞。前文已經(jīng)有連詞although了，后句不應(yīng)該還用介詞，所以去掉but。