Question

【題目】目前，不少人在寫作文或交流時(shí)喜歡使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言。就此現(xiàn)象，你班最近舉行了一場討論。請根據(jù)下表的提示，客觀地介紹討論的情況及你的觀點(diǎn)。

40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	你的觀點(diǎn)
1.有點(diǎn)荒誕，有時(shí)讓人無法理解 2.違背了漢語的語法規(guī)則，對學(xué)習(xí)毫無幫助	1.幽默，使語言更生動 2.有助于表達(dá)思想	1… 2. …

荒誕ridiculous

注意：

1 對所給提示，不要簡單翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

2 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language. _______________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there has come a kind of language called Web Language. Recently, our class has held a discussion on whether it’s good for students to use Web Language when writing compositions or communication. Students’ opinions on this matter vary from person to person.

40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using Web Language, thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life. Worse still, it’s hard for them to make themselves understood. In their opinion, it is against Chinese grammar, and it’s not beneficial to students’ studies.

However, the rest of the students, accounting for 60%, are fond of it. They hold the opinion that what they say sounds humorous, which makes the language more lively. Moreover, it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.

【反】Personally, it is a phenomenon worth thinking about. I don’t think it good to use Web Language. It may be fashionable as some may think, but it may also make our meanings confusing, leaving other people at a loss.

【正】As far as I’m concerned, in our contemporary society, it’s quite common especially for us teenagers to use Web language when chatting with others. It’s convenient for us to express our feelings. However, when it comes to some formal situation such as writing compositions, it is not appropriate for us to use it.

【解析】寫作背景：目前不少人在寫作文或交流時(shí)喜歡使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言，就此現(xiàn)象，你班最近舉行了一場討論。請根據(jù)下表的提示，客觀地介紹討論的情況及你的觀點(diǎn)。介紹觀點(diǎn)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來寫，主要分四部分：第一部分交代班里進(jìn)行了在寫作文或交流時(shí)喜歡使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言是否對學(xué)生有好處的討論。第二部分40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為1.有點(diǎn)荒誕，有時(shí)讓人無法理解2.違背了漢語的語法規(guī)則，對學(xué)習(xí)毫無幫助。第三部分60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為1.幽默，使語言更生動2.有助于表達(dá)思想。第四部分發(fā)表自己對此的觀點(diǎn)。

寫作時(shí)要注意要點(diǎn)全面，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰，觀點(diǎn)明確。還要注意高級詞匯和句型的運(yùn)用來增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。如賓語從句whether it’s good for students to use Web Language,定語從句which are not commonly used in our daily life.和which makes the language more lively.it作形式主語it’s hard for them to make themselves understood.和It’s convenient for us to express our feelings.同位語從句that what they say sounds humorous, it作形式賓語I don’t think it good to use Web Language.詞語vary from person to person. in favor of, be beneficial to, be of help, worth thinking.連接詞Worse still, In their opinion, However, Moreover, Personally, As far as I’m concerned等。