Question

下面這幅圖片描繪的是一幅反映十一黃金周交通堵塞及交通壓力問(wèn)題的場(chǎng)景。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)這幅圖片的理解用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。你的短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：
描述圖中所表達(dá)的相關(guān)信息；
分析此現(xiàn)象的原因；
提出你的建議(至少兩條)
注意：
可參用下面文章開頭所給提示，你必要地發(fā)揮想象。
詞數(shù)120左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。
提示詞：高速免費(fèi)政策 toll-free road policy ; 
交通擁堵traffic congestion

On the eight-day national holiday many drivers became victims of traffic jam on main highways. As is shown in the picture,                                         
                                                                                

Answer 1

On the eight-day national holiday many drivers became victims of traffic jam on main highways. As is shown in the picture, millions of drivers and passengers flocked to the highways to go home or to tourist spots, which caused great traffic congestion. Many people caught in jam were seen playing sports and even walking dogs to kill time.
There are many reasons for the heavy traffic. First, as the economy is developing, the number of cars has been increasing than expected. Then, more people prefer to drive their cars to travel instead of using public transport, which will save money thanks to the toll-free road policy. Also, the traffic system is not efficient enough for so many cars.
How could we deal with the heavy traffic? In my opinion, the government should improve the traffic system. It is necessary to provide updated traffic information for drivers on the road. In addition, drivers can prefer the roads which are not crowded. Avoiding the rush time is also a good way. Besides, if the government abandoned the tolls altogether, travel times would be more flexible for drivers. 

試題分析：本文屬于看圖作文�？磮D作文的難點(diǎn)在于考生首先要看懂圖，要從圖形中篩選出要點(diǎn)，本文首先簡(jiǎn)單描述一些國(guó)慶長(zhǎng)假的堵車情景。在分析原因時(shí)說(shuō)明，一是經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展了，人們買車多了。二是司機(jī)的素質(zhì)不高，隨便插隊(duì)加塞。對(duì)于如何處理交通堵塞，可以從加強(qiáng)對(duì)司機(jī)的教育，錯(cuò)開上下班高峰期等措施。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：看圖作文的難點(diǎn)在于讀圖和篩選要點(diǎn)。在試題分析中已經(jīng)做出了分析。在寫作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用高級(jí)的句型來(lái)靈活表達(dá)要點(diǎn)，要使用合適的連接詞把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)連接成一個(gè)整體，使文章更流暢，更有層次感。如果可能運(yùn)用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提高文章的檔次。