Question

請根據(jù)下面的英文短詩，展開適當?shù)南胂�，寫一篇短文�?br />標題為：My Teacher Mr Moore
There’s a teacher Mr .Moore.
Who is lovely and thirty-four.
Always encouraging us to try.
He leads us to a world of “why”.
We all admire him more and more.
注意：
1.不得照抄短詩原文。
2.必須結(jié)合短詩的內(nèi)容，發(fā)揮想象，適當展開。
3.必須突出短詩的主題，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。
4.短文不能寫成詩歌形式。
5.詞數(shù)：120左右。

Answer 1

Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one who impresses me most. Though he is 34,he looks very young for his age. And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school.
Compared with other teachers ,Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching .He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting .In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. So ,instead of giving us answers immediately ,he encourage us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions. With his help. we’ve learned how to analyze and settle problem. What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to!
He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much

試題分析：這是一篇半開放式的作文，考生在寫作時要注意短詩的重心，切忌偏題，詩主要是對這個老師進行了描述，考生要緊緊抓住這些特點，適當展開自己的想象，結(jié)合生活學習中老師的特點。在寫作的過程中注意句型的多樣化和連接詞的使用。要求考生用地道的英語表達自己的觀點，要求觀點明確，駕馭語言的能力強，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個整體。
點評：開放式作文難就難在沒有要點，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地大，但也增加了難度，有的考生會覺得無話可說，這時可以充分利用所給的首句，展開陳述，但要符合英語習慣，句式選擇要富有變化。