Question

Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
1．現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時尚 
2．網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題 
3．我的建議

Answer 1

Nowadays, online shopping has gained great popularity among more and more web users.
Undoubtedly speaking, online shopping has many advantages. To begin with, compared with traditional shopping, it’s very convenient. Besides, more choices than real stores are another attraction to customers.
However, online shopping has its disadvantages. It’s common that articles aren’t so good as they are described online that customers sometimes buy fake goods. Moreover, it’s troublesome and annoying for many customers to make a change when they are not satisfied with what they bought online.
As for me, I like online shopping but I expect that effective measures should be taken to make it better. The government should work out strict regulations and rules to prevent unfaithful and unlawful activities of online shop owners.

試題分析：考查提綱類作文寫作，重點考查考生的書面表達的能力。網(wǎng)購的話題應(yīng)該是中學(xué)生熟悉，有話可寫的素材，因此難度并不大。把握三個要點：1．現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時尚，2．網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題， 3．作者的建議，注意組織鍛煉和過渡�？忌�在寫作時，一定要緊扣寫作要點進行寫作，三個要點都十分重要，如果考生能夠在緊扣寫作要點的基礎(chǔ)上，抓住語言的準確性，再寫出幾個亮點詞匯和句式，得到高分應(yīng)該比較輕松。
【亮點說明】文章有兩個方面的亮點我們應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)，一是文章的連貫性很強，渾然天成，這充分的體現(xiàn)在一些連貫詞To begin with, Besides, However, Moreover的使用上，第二方面是文章巧妙的使用了一些固定短語和句型：Undoubtedly speaking毋庸置疑,  As for至于， work out制定出， compared with traditional shopping, it’s very convenient. 這是過去分詞做狀語， It’s common that articles aren’t so good as they are described online that customers sometimes buy fake goods. 這句話用了it做形式主語，it’s troublesome and annoying for many customers to make a change when they are not satisfied with what they bought online.這句話也用了it做形式主語，而且還有賓語從句。I like online shopping but I expect that effective measures should be taken to make it better. 這句話用了被動語態(tài)。