Question

假設(shè)你是學(xué)校太陽能汽車研究小組成員， 請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文， 對(duì)比介紹太陽能汽車和普通汽車。主要信息如下：

	太陽能汽車	普通汽車
特點(diǎn)	使用太陽能	使用汽油，燃油
優(yōu)點(diǎn)	安全，清潔	污染環(huán)境
缺點(diǎn)	能量少， 速度慢，夜間不能行使	能量足， 使用方便
建議	發(fā)展技術(shù)，改善能量	使用清潔能源

[寫作要求]
只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容
作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫

Answer 1

Solar cars are cars that use sunlight for power while common cars use gas or petral as their fuel. Both of them have advantages and disadvantages. Solar cars are safe and clean but they have low power and they are slow and they cannot run at night. Common cars have strong power and it is convenient for us to use but they pollute the environment.
I suggest that we need to develop future technologies to improve the power for solar cars and to use clean energy for common cars.

試題分析：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Solar cars are cars that use sunlight for power while common cars use gas or petral as their fuel. 這句話用了定語從句和while的并列句， Solar cars are safe and clean but they have low power and they are slow and they cannot run at night. 這句話用了but的轉(zhuǎn)折句和并列句，Common cars have strong power and t it is convenient for us to use but they pollute the environment.這句話用了be convenient to do， I suggest that we need to develop future technologies to improve the power for solar cars and to use clean energy for common cars.這句話用了虛擬語氣和不定式做目的狀語。