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書(shū)面表達(dá)（20分）
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文：一家賓館新開(kāi)業(yè)，為吸引外國(guó)賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳，用英文寫(xiě)一篇介紹，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1.地點(diǎn)：距離白山入口處500米。
2.房間及其價(jià)格：?jiǎn)稳碎g，共20間：100元/天；雙人間，共15間，150元/天；熱水淋浴
3.餐飲：有餐廳（提供中餐和西餐）；有咖啡廳（提供茶，咖啡等）
4.游泳池：全天免費(fèi)開(kāi)放
5.歡迎預(yù)定
注意：詞數(shù)不少于80詞，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；使行文連貫
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.______________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Baishi Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishi Mounatian. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 yuan and a double room 150 yuan for one night. You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves 3 meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the café drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool which is open all day and free of charge.
All are welcome!

試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作首先按照題目的順序?qū)�賓館的位置進(jìn)行介紹stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishi Mounatian.然后對(duì)房間、價(jià)格情況進(jìn)行介紹It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers.在句式上可以多用介詞來(lái)連詞成句，又表達(dá)自然貼切，再對(duì)餐飲和游泳池的情況進(jìn)行介紹，重點(diǎn)突出免費(fèi)We also have a swimming pool which is open all day and free of charge.最后呼吁大家提前預(yù)定并表示歡迎You are advised to book in advance. All are welcome!
點(diǎn)評(píng)：應(yīng)用文是比較容易寫(xiě)的文體，平時(shí)學(xué)生的練習(xí)也比較多。寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中注意避免使用中式英文，對(duì)于表達(dá)內(nèi)容層次時(shí)需要使用平時(shí)積累的層次關(guān)系的短語(yǔ)，多使用被動(dòng)，倒裝、虛擬來(lái)提升作文的美度。在平時(shí)寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)該多進(jìn)行閱讀，對(duì)閱讀過(guò)程中寫(xiě)的好的表達(dá)要進(jìn)行積累，并且學(xué)以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。