Question

假如你是林凡，得知你的朋友郝強(qiáng)生病住院，需要一大筆錢，導(dǎo)致他心情沉重、郁郁寡歡。請(qǐng)根據(jù)一下的提示給寫一封信,給他一些關(guān)心和建議。
要點(diǎn)提示： 1. 學(xué)會(huì)照顧好自己，保持好良好的精神狀態(tài)（stay in…）。
2. 多于醫(yī)生、朋友談心，從中得到幫助（get help from）。
3. 不要擔(dān)心錢，因?yàn)槲覀儠?huì)幫你籌集錢（raise money）。
4. 有空我會(huì)去看你，幫你補(bǔ)補(bǔ)課（help…with…）。
5. 希望你能笑對(duì)人生（smile at…）早日健康。
寫作要求：要點(diǎn)齊全,要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)70個(gè)左右。（短文開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
Dear Hao Qiang,
I am sorry to hear that you are ill in hospital. I understand your feeling very well. But you know nobody can be happy all the time.
Your sincerely,
Lin Fan.

Answer 1

Dear Hao Qiang,
I am sorry to hear that you are ill in hospital. I understand your feeling very well. But you know nobody can be happy all the time. You should learn to take good care of yourself and stay in a good mood. You can talk to the doctors or your friends when you are upset. Try to get help from them.You must follow the doctor’s advice and take the medicine on time. Don’t worry about money because we can raise money for you. My friend and I will visit when we are free. We can help you with your lesson. I hope you can smile at life and get well soon.
Your sincerely,
Lin Fan

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求給生病的朋友一些建議同時(shí)表示你的關(guān)心。主要用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文不僅注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如all the time，take good care of， stay in a good mood.等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。